Write a value prop in one sentence
Most value propositions try to say everything. "We help businesses of all sizes streamline their workflows, improve collaboration, and drive growth through innovative solutions." That says nothing. It could describe any software company on earth.
A good value proposition answers three questions in one sentence: what do you do, who is it for, and why is it better? Not all three need to be explicit, but the reader should understand all three after reading it.
"Invoice your clients in 30 seconds, not 30 minutes." That's Freshbooks. You know what it does (invoicing), who it's for (people who invoice clients), and why it's better (speed). One sentence.
"Track your time without thinking about it." You know it's time tracking, it's for busy people, and it's effortless. The simplicity is the selling point.
The framework: [Do the thing] + [for/without the pain]. "Send email campaigns without writing code." "Manage projects without the meetings." "Learn a language in 10 minutes a day."
If you can't write this sentence, you don't have a clarity problem. You have a positioning problem. Fix that first.
Write your value proposition using the format: [Do the thing] + [for/without the pain]. If it takes more than one sentence, you're trying to say too much.
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